Critique & Consultation — Honest, Actionable, Personalized Feedback

Need some direction on your work in progress?
Want to know if your book's opening works to hook a reader?
Wondering what's missing?
Need someone to tell you where to polish your writing?
Planning on querying an agent or publisher?

Let's answer your writing and publishing questions together.

This limited-time-offer Critique & Consultation service gives you direct access to Angela James — a #1 New York Times bestselling editor and author career expert, who reads 600+ books a year across both indie and traditional publishing and has reviewed tens of thousands of manuscript submissions in her career.

In 30 minutes, you'll get honest, actionable feedback on your writing and the strategic career guidance that's hard to find anywhere else.

What's included:

• ~15 minutes of verbal critique on your submission (up to 5,000 words, or 4,000 words + a query letter or cover copy)
• ~15 minutes of Q&A covering next steps, publishing guidance, career development, writing advice, and industry insights
• A video recording of your session to revisit anytime
• A follow-up PDF with general writing advice and 2–3 specific takeaways from your conversation

This service is for you if you're:

• Wondering whether your opening is working — and what to do if it isn't
• Ready to query an agent or publisher and want expert eyes before you do
• Stuck on your story and need a trusted outside perspective
• Craving honest feedback without the judgment

... and much more!

If you need an expert conversation about a writing, editing, or publishing problem, Angela's approach is direct, non-judgmental, and tailored specifically to your work and your goals.

Available for a limited time only. Full payment required to schedule. Session must be completed within 45 days of purchase. No refunds.